Aliveoncamera's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Naga]

This is very nice. The detail in the Naga is simply astounding, you really succeeded in giving it a inhuman, slimy look, while still keeping some familiar traits. However, I do feel that you could darken some of the areas, it would give even more depth to this. Great work!

Jaona responds:

Thanks! :)

[Revenge]

This is absolutely lovely. Seriously. The composition is great, the color choices are great, There are so many strong things about this picture. If I were to make one small complaint, I'd say that it's a bit centralized, and the character looks like the subject is floating, some stronger shadows would remedy this, I think.

zephyo responds:

Thank you. I appreciate the critique. I agree; for the lighting, there aren't enough shadows, it kinda looks like the lighting on the guy is the shadow. Next time I'll try to put the focus not in the exact center.